Monday, January 28, 2008

We made some minor changes to the script

Ray had some very good points so we made some changes from the original to keep the story a little more diverse. We also changed the name of the country, to avoid copyright issues with Chris Landreth's Clown name from Bingostan to Clownia. I also think that the Bingostan name is close sounding to the middle east region. However, Clownia is closer to the baltic, asia region. I don't want people to think that this is just a direct correlation to the topics in the middle east, but the whole world.

Midori, made a great suggestion on the look of the clown. So I am sketching the clown to a more playful and chubbier look. I want him to look very playful but have his attitude in the interview to be ugly and ill-tempered. Right now the concept sketch is a skinny clown and the skinniness of him makes him look evil and supervillian like. His face will look rounder and more playful


New revised story script

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